We are kinda scared as you might think we saw two of our friends die and we was was the cause of one of them. Our leader Ralph isn't really doing anything because the conch is broken and the only person that is doing something is Jack. We don't really want to be in Jack's tribe but if we didn't we would have got killed maybe like Simon did. Seeing piggy dies because of Roger pulled the lever to knock down the that big rock.
Once the hunter kidnapped us we didn't know what to do but to try to get our self set free but we couldn't because Roger tied us up. I wish Ralph would have tried to save us but if he did then piggy would have died anyways so it really wouldn't matter what would have happen.We feel kinda like it's our fault that Piggy and Simon died . Like if we didn't jump on top of Simon because we was scared.
we don't think that we should have went up to castle rock because we already know how Jack is because we went hunting with him once and he was crazy. we was trying to tell Ralph that Jack was going to do something to them but he just didn't listen .
So are question is What is happening with the boys on the island are they going crazy or what?
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I noticed how you used "we" in most of the blog. That was pretty cool. Theres a couple grammer problems you might wanna check like "because we was scared." and "Seeing piggy dies because". I really liked your ending alot, it was smart.
I like the ending beacuse it is very powerful and definitely sums up the entry, Make sure you phrase your sentences correctly. Although your writing is conversational it still has to be proffesional
i like your title
and i also like how you put a question at the eny of you story and you need to fix some of your sententences correctly
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